I don't have a problem with 6 INT. I agree that the Sense Motive is the only mental skill he really needs. Also, he's not likely to be working very far from his much smarter boss.
But does he really need to weigh 438 lb? Or is it even appropriate that he does? By the random height and weight rulse that's a 1-in-5000 half-orc, not only tallest possible for his race but heaviest possible for his height. Now obviously he's a big guy; the 20 Str suggests that even for his race there's a lot of him. But with an above-average Con, he's shouldn't be too obese. Unless his preferred form of combat is to sit on people, I think a weight that's average or slightly above average (for his height) would be more fitting.
I'm nitpicking, of course. Overally, yeah, this looks like a suitable bouncer.
But does he really need to weigh 438 lb? Or is it even appropriate that he does? By the random height and weight rulse that's a 1-in-5000 half-orc, not only tallest possible for his race but heaviest possible for his height. Now obviously he's a big guy; the 20 Str suggests that even for his race there's a lot of him. But with an above-average Con, he's shouldn't be too obese. Unless his preferred form of combat is to sit on people, I think a weight that's average or slightly above average (for his height) would be more fitting.
I'm nitpicking, of course. Overally, yeah, this looks like a suitable bouncer.