Send In The Clowns… (or, Converting the Oddballs)

[Cleon]

How about Treasure: see text with an explanation that his gear is his treasure?

Would not "Treasure: Equipment (see below)" cover that?

 

[freyar]

Then have a statement again in the background saying he keeps no treasure other than his equipment? Or if you don't want that, we could just remove "(see below)."

 

[Cleon]

Then have a statement again in the background saying he keeps no treasure other than his equipment? Or if you don't want that, we could just remove "(see below)."

The "see below" was a reference to the Equipment entry Donald has in Combat, not a suggestion I wanted to add to the flavour text.

 

[freyar]

Ahhh, right, missed that. I assume you'll be taking out the price listing from that before we're finished.

Any ideas on tactics? Maybe he's a conservative fighter until he flies into a berzerk rage?

 

[Cleon]

Ahhh, right, missed that. I assume you'll be taking out the price listing from that before we're finished.

Any ideas on tactics? Maybe he's a conservative fighter until he flies into a berzerk rage?

Well if I remember my cartoons rightly Donald is often a bit of a blowhard, who often starts aggressively until he faces a tough foe, whereupon he often turns from duck to chicken, but if a powerful opponent triggered his rage (i.e. by spanking his nephews), Donald could make short work of them.

 

[freyar]

Hmmmm.

Donald fights aggressively against inferior opponents, but, like many a blowhard, he is more than happy to flee a superior foe. If he feels too insulted or when his nephews are insulted, he flies into a berzerk rage, willing to attack anyone and anything.

 

[Cleon]

Hmmmm.

Donald fights aggressively against inferior opponents, but, like many a blowhard, he is more than happy to flee a superior foe. If he feels too insulted or when his nephews are insulted, he flies into a berzerk rage, willing to attack anyone and anything.

Hmm...

I like this rephrasing a bit better:

Donald fights aggressively against inferior opponents, but, like many a blowhard, he often show timidity when facing a superior foe. If he feels too insulted or his nephews are injured, he flies into a berzerk rage, willing to attack anyone and anything.

 

[freyar]

Looks good if we change "show" to "shows."

Description: An anthropomorphic duck, wearing a blue uniform and a white sailor's hat.

 

[Cleon]

Looks good if we change "show" to "shows."

Updating Working Draft.

Description: An anthropomorphic duck, wearing a blue uniform and a white sailor's hat.

That'll do I guess.

 

[freyar]

Do you have any ideas for background text? I admit I'm feeling a bit blank on this one.